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I do love villain MCs πŸ˜©πŸ™ I like how we could choose to be better or stay evil (which was my choice lol) My Gonzague is a menace to society and always angry whenever things don't go her way 🀣

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your writing is so beautiful!!

Thank you!

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i enjoyed this very much, your writing is very pleasant (i dunno how else to describe it haha but i love it)

the angst! *chef's kiss* it hurts in the best way, i'm excited to see where this goes. some sort of tragedy is imminent, i'm sure

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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I still can’t get over the fact that that tall lady has a kid and the father is NEVERS like WHAT he need to die

im so very intrigued by this story the way you write is so good! but maybe a small request that we have an option to change font sizes in the future? my eyes were straining quite a bit and Id love to enjoy your story without it!

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Hi! I'm glad you enjoyed the game so far. :)

I'm sorry the font has been causing you eyestrain. I'll look into how I can integrate a couple font sizes in the settings of the game. In the meantime, I recommend using the alternate font, open sans, which is easier on the eyes in my experience, and your browser's zoom-in feature, which should allow you to get a bigger font without interfering with the UI much. It might persist throughout my itch.io profile and my other games if you don't change it back, though.

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Thankyou for the tips! I will definitely implement those next time <3

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gonna steal her man LOL

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Is this still being continued or has it been abandoned??

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I'm currently working on chapter 2. I post weekly updates on my progress on the Tumblr blog for all my projects. Updates can take a long time to write, so I would advise patience.

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nevers my beloved D: 

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Sorry u_u

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Looking forward to more of this... So glad that I found this masterpiece.. I just hope the next update come soon. Excellent writing 😚😚😚😚

Thank you!

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Excited for more, will be patiently waiting for more content, and superb writing!

Thank you! ❀️

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your writing is *muah* chef kiss

definitely a project that I'm looking forward to seeing more of in the future

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

is chartres also a ro? love him already

Hello! Chartres is aromantic in this story, so while you can have a close relationship with him, it's not really romantic in nature. It stays a friends-with-benefits type of situation.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! YOU SHOULD MAKE MORE I HOPE TO SEE MORE SOON!! YOUR AMAZING AND I HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD DAY/NIGHT/AFTERNOON 

Thank you! <3

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Damn that's really intense, I love it can't wait for more. Really heartbroken what Nevers did to us. 

Glad you enjoyed the demo! ❀️

wait... who am I?πŸ₯

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this is truly excellent work. the way you write is so beautiful and nuanced, as is the character work. i really look forward to what you do next, and even if that never comes, this first chapter has already left such a big impression

That's a lovely compliment, thank you so much!

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I love this story the plot is very interesting.β€οΈβ€πŸ©ΉπŸ˜­

Thank you! ❀️

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Wow, I enjoyed this one so much. Your writing is so descriptive and I've really grown attached to Gonzague already. I look forward to the next instalment.

Thank you so much for the nice compliment!

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even though this is very much new its amazing and ill wait as long as ya need for the next chapter as you can tell im very much hooked 

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Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it! And I'm thankful for your patience. :)

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Wow! I'm hooked! Love the way the story just draws you in, it's only been a chapter but characters are interesting and the the plot intriguing. I know we're meant to be the villain but damn i feel for Gonzague!

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Thank you! I really wanted to make Gonzague somewhat sympathetic. I’m glad it came across!